Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Setareh's Story that she wrote for homework this week


One day room 17 were learning about horses and dinosaurs. We were having a sleepover at the Auckland museum. Setareh said the dinosaurs were alive. Then the horses came alive and came to save us. Then they took us to a secret library. Ciara saw a pink button and pushed it. Then a door appeared and Laura thinks it’s a magic pass way. Then we all went in it and it took as back to room 17 in Pinehill School. It looked different, said Ciara. Then Setareh saw a blue button and then she pushed the button. Then Laura said the white board is moving and she was very scared. Sam said what’s behind it. David shouted it looks like a laser. Mrs Martel took down the laser and said it’s a portal laser. We can point to the dinosaurs and send them back to normal. Jahnvi yelled oh no here comes the dinosaurs. Then the horses came really fast and grabbed the laser and pointed at the dinosaurs and Setareh saw one dinosaur left over and it was hiding. Mrs Martel grabbed the laser from the horse’s mouse and then the horses went very fast then Ciara saw the dinosaur and pointed to the dinosaur and then it was morning and everything was back to normal. The end.

3 comments:

  1. What a fabulous story, Setareh. You obviously enjoyed our shared writing in class. While it is lots of fun to use lots of different colours for the font, It is also interesting that some of the colours are quite hard to read!

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  2. So nice to see your story here, Setareh! Good job!

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  3. Great work,:) Iwant to read more!:)

    From Ben and Nell, from appletonclass4.wordpress.com

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