Hi I am daniel from point view in room twelve. I really liked how you had lots of interesting details. I also like how you made the story funny and cool.
:)I really liked Viki's space story because she had fab ideas! :(Next time I think you should add more story to it to make it longer. Nicole and Grace Appleton Primary School, England
I liked that you used good vocabulery and wow words welldone :)
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Indya kilbride swainston
Appleton class 4 year 5
I love the vocabulery and all the wow words you used to make a good story well done :)
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ReplyDeleteWell done it was great about space monster
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from gemma & sophie
cool video it was very interesting. From HAO! AND DAVID, Point View School
ReplyDeleteHi I am daniel from point view in room twelve. I really liked how you had lots of interesting details. I also like how you made the story funny and cool.
ReplyDeleteGreat work.
ReplyDeleteI loved your great description.
Tilly
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Evie
Appleton Class 4
:)I really liked Viki's space story because she had fab ideas!
ReplyDelete:(Next time I think you should add more story to it to make it longer.
Nicole and Grace
Appleton Primary School, England