Dear room 17thanks for sharing your blog.We like your stories keep up the great work.from Gemma & Aine
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I liked how you put lots of information in it.From meah jerry and kimberly from point view school.
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Dear Room 17,That was very cool. :) From Jack and AlexAppleton Primary School, England
I really liked the story and the disriptive words you put in it, but try not to start your sentences with He did this...... He did that....... From *Ria* *Zoe* *Mimi*:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *Appleton Class 4
Dear room 17
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing your blog.We like your stories keep up the great work.
from Gemma & Aine
I liked how you explained what happened.from vivian, desmond and Allien point view school
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put lots of information in it.From meah jerry and kimberly from point view school.
ReplyDeleteWow! You guys must of had a fun time meeting Ronald McDonald.
ReplyDeleteFrom Theresa in Holy Family in Australia
Dear Room 17,
ReplyDeleteThat was very cool. :)
From Jack and Alex
Appleton Primary School, England
I really liked the story and the disriptive words you put in it, but try not to start your sentences with He did this...... He did that.......
ReplyDeleteFrom *Ria* *Zoe* *Mimi*
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